语录网随笔 「高考应用文」13 An Announcement about Delaying the Flight

「高考应用文」13 An Announcement about Delaying the Flight

Unit 13 An Announcement about Delaying the Flight

假如你是一名导游,将随团去上海,机场由于大雾暂时关闭,去上海的班机将推迟五个小时,请你将此情况口头通知给旅游者,并告诉他们下面两件事:

1、今天下午去附近的一个风景点,三点左右去购物中心。

2、想去其他地方的人必须在晚上六点前返回。

要求100字左右,格式正确,语言简洁。

“范文”

Announcement

Ladies and gentlemen,

May I have your attention please? I have an announcement to make.

Because of① the terrible fog②, the airport will be closed③. The flight to Shanghai④ will be delayed⑤ for 5 hours. Now we have to change some of our plans. This afternoon we will go to a place of interest nearby⑥. At about 3 o’clock we will go to the shopping center⑦. You can do some shopping⑧ there. Those who want to go to other places must be back before 6 in the evening.

Thank you.

“注释:”

①because of:因为,由于

②the terrible fog:大雾

③be closed:关闭的

④flight:(飞机的)航班,班机

⑤delay:延迟,耽搁

⑥nearby:附近的

⑦the shopping center:购物中心

⑧do some shopping:买东西,购物

“点评:”

这是一篇根据内容提示展开的应用文,是一份口头通知。

作为口头通知,要注意运用正确的格式和表达方式,如本文用“Announcement”作标题,表明这是一篇口头通知。在正文的开头用了称呼语“Ladies and gentlemen”,紧随其后“May I have your attention please? I have an announcement to make.”使用了口头通知的常用句型,以达到提醒对方注意聆听的目的。文末使用了“Thank you”一词来暗示对方通知内容已讲完,二来表示礼貌。

根据内容提示,作者使用了简洁的语言将要点一一加以叙述,条理清楚、层次分明,“because of, be closed, flight, be delayed”等惯用短语和词的使用很准确。另外,大量使用简单句是本文的一大特色(仅一句“those who … in the evening”例外)。资料来源:英语作文高分必背丛书:高考/李华田主编,武汉大学出版社,2005

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